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Fresh Grad Lands Job as Real Estate Agent With Help from Professional Writers

People go to websites to get the information they desperately need.  They could be looking for an answer to a nagging question.  They might be looking for help in completing an important task.  For recent graduates, they might be looking for ways on how to prepare a comprehensive resume that can capture the attention of the hiring manager

Manush is a recent graduate from a prestigious university in California who is looking for a job opportunity as a real estate agent.  While he already has samples provided by his friends, he still feels something lacking in his resume.  Specifically, the he believes that his professional objective statement lacks focus and clarity. 

Thus, he sought our assistance in improving editing and proofreading his resume. 

In revising his resume, iwritegigs highlighted his soft skills such as his communication skills, ability to negotiate, patience and tactfulness.  In the professional experience part, our team added some skills that are aligned with the position he is applying for.

When he was chosen for the real estate agent position, he sent us this thank you note:

“Kudos to the team for a job well done.  I am sincerely appreciative of the time and effort you gave on my resume.  You did not only help me land the job I had always been dreaming of but you also made me realize how important adding those specific keywords to my resume!  Cheers!

Manush’s story shows the importance of using powerful keywords to his resume in landing the job he wanted.

Midterm

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Below are the questions for the exam with the choices of answers:

Question #2
A  10 words.
B  40 words.
C  20 words.
D  There is no limit.
Question #3
A  Thanking you in advance for sending a copy of the contract for installation of a new HVAC. 
B  Please send a contract for heating and ventilation work by April 1 to allow installation to begin by April 15. 
C  I would appreciate receiving a copy of the contract for your proposed installation at your earliest possible convenience. 
D  We hope you can get our work completed in a timely manner. 
Question #4
A  Edit, proofread, and evaluate.
B  Writing, questioning, and guessing.
C  Researching, organizing, and drafting. 
D  Analyze, anticipate, and adapt. 
Question #5
A  You may be summarizing something in which you have worked very diligently. 
B  You may have a very important email going to a large group or your CEO.
C  All of these
D  You may get passionate about something and want to fire back an email.
Question #6
A  Capture the reader’s attention and interest.
B  Cite facts, statistics, expert opinions, examples, and specific details to support her request.
C  Provide her telephone number.
D  Identify herself and her company.
Question #7
A  Using positive language that avoids negative words.
B  Adding unnecessary words to a message to make it longer. 
C  Adapting a message to its audience.
D  Eliminating unnecessary words like long lead-ins and words that add no value.  
Question #8
A  Edit, proofread, and evaluate. 
B  Analyze, anticipate, and adapt. 
C  Prewriting, drafting, and revising. 
D  Organize,research, and draft.
Question #9
A  Buffer, reasons, bad news, and closing
B  Buffer, explanation, reasons, and closing
C  Bad news, reasons, buffer, and closing
D  Bad news, explanation, reasons, and closing
Question #10
A  Buffer, reasons, bad news, and closing.
B  Subject, closing, body, opening.
C  Subject, closing, body, and opening.
D  Subject, opening, body, and closing.
Question #11
A  include familiar expressions such as “If I may be of further assistance, please don’t hesitate to call me.”
B  provide specific details (time, date, etc.) if further action is required.
C  avoid repeating the information provided or referring to its use.
D  omit the sender’s name to avoid legal liability. 
Question #12
A  I recently read an article about your firm in the local newspaper.
B  My name is Jill Aubrey, and I am the office manager for Cape Consulting Inc.
C  Cape Consulting Inc. is the premier communication-consulting firm in the Cape and islands area.
D  Please answer the following questions about your Web services.
Question #13
A  Bad news, reasons, buffer, and closing.
B  Closing, buffer, bad news, and reasons. 
C  Buffer, reasons, bad news, and closing. 
D  Buffer, bad news, reasons, and closing.
Question #14
A  If you have any further questions about this new benefits plan, please do not hesitate to contact me. 
B  We really need to implement this new benefits plan soon. 
C  Please email me at your earliest convenience with your decision.
D  Contacting me December 1st about your support of this new benefits plan will allow me to present this proposal at the next strategic planning session.
Question #15
A  formality.
B  social media marketing.
C  permanency.
D  length.
Question #16
A  Lists decrease the readability level of a document.
B  Lists decrease a reader’s comprehension of the main ideas.
C  Lists allow readers to review main ideas quickly. Increase skim value.
D  Lists confuse readers because they are visually distracting.
Question #17
A  I want to thank each and every stockholder.
B  It is absolutely essential that our accounting records are accurate.
C  Let’s not repeat our competitor’s mistakes.
D  Please refer back to the June financial statements.
Question #18
A  It was our one and only office manager who won the raffle.
B  Three candidates are running for the board.
C  There are three important issues that we can choose to discuss at today’s meeting.
D  There is only one job opening currently available.
Question #19
A  Yes, we will send the information you requested.
B  I am writing this letter to inform you that we will send the information you requested.
C  You may be interested to learn that we will send the information you requested.
D  This is to advise you that we will send the information you requested.
Question #20
A  emphasizes second-person pronouns instead of first-person (I, we) pronouns.
B  uses slang and abbreviations to personalize the message.
C  means that all messages are written in the active voice.
D  dictates that all sentences be written as commands.
Question #21
A  The task force reached a conclusion about how to improve morale.
B  We hope to discover the reason our profits are declining.
C  The board will conduct a discussion about the possible merger.
D  We will give serious consideration to your application.
Question #22
A  When language is sensitive and bias free.
B  When the same word type or tense is used in a list (i.e. walk, talk, run, not walking, talked, ran).
C  When a writer joins two independent clauses with a comma.
D  When modifiers must be close to the words they describe or limit. 
Question #23
A  delivering bad news.
B  revealing sensitive news.
C  expecting the audience to be pleased, mildly interested, or neutral.
D  presenting ideas requiring persuasion.
Question #24
A  Analyze, Introduce, Demand, and Act.
B  Anticipate, Interest, Desire, and Action.
C  Action, Introduce, Desire, and Action.
D  Attention, Interest, Desire, and Action.
Question #25
A  Enclosure in a memo.
B  Email follow-up.
C  Paragraph.
D  Create a numbered or bulleted list in the body of the letter.